Thursday, December 10, 2015

short story slam week 34, and sunday whirl


Whirl 228 

Short Story Slam Week 34 on Holiday Sentiments

carl maxine has stage fright
his hands fringes
the dawn after dark night
in visible days of sunray
family reunion exists
 igloo room burns love
christmas tree wears gold
lunch break and yummy cookies
tooth fairy tugs money inside
a pillow case full of cash
in reality, and  in wild dreamland
vanessa, vikki, victor, and gloria glide
shengdan cart
beautiful music sings all night
seasons greetings arrive
doubtful mind softens
who cares about the face behind your mask
small kids expect encouraging gifts
lego toys are full of pride

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lady in red... 

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V stands for Vanessa Hudson, Vikki Zhao, and Victor Carl Page

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Carpe Diem Special #186 Georgia's 2nd "days of Christmas" (choka)


Kristjaan Panneman said...

Gorgeous choka ...

Roxanne Burns George Arrington-Hans said...

well done.

Carol Campbell said...

Very good!

Su-sieee! Mac said...

Nice piece. I can sympathize. I get stage fright before any party or public outing.
The View from the Top of the Ladder

Roger Owen Green said...


Reading Pleasure said...

Nicely done.

Trubes said...

and VERY well written.
Thank you for sharing your VISION with us,
in such eloquent VERSE !

Best wishes,
ABCW team.

Georgia Koch said...

What a lovely choka .. I simply love this ... and wouldn't mind some Lego myself for Christmas .. they are so encouraging. Bastet

Malia Craig Tagg Lawrence Page said...


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Melody Steenkamp said...

A couple of seemingly lovely ladies, who other than usual your choice of entry, surprising !

Have a nice abc-day / - week
♫ M e l ☺ d y ♫ (abc-w-team)

Angenette Karen Gregory Olivara Beredjick said...

love the lady in red.

The Purple Treehouse said...